Mar 22, 2011, 03:32 AM
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The Men Of The teen and adult class.
Beginning had been a normal person since 20 years old. Bill Gates started his career in software technology field. When he was 31 year old, he became a youngest billionaire in our history (the record was broken after that). 37 years old. He was the richest billionaire in the United State along with having won an award of national science and technology. 39 year old who was a richest billionaire around the world. After his Microsoft group had presented on share market which became a company of a highest value in global market. Annually, the profit of his company always passed overall of profit of 49 of 50 largest software companies in the world. He is a man that everybody, especially, they are teens and youths who is very admiring and respectful. Moreover, Bill Gates could attract attention of everybody, is not only his property but also other ones.
Having some people suspected his success. Some called which is a mythology, and it was difficult to believe. However, having a point that don’t suspect, there are:
Bill Gates didn’t base on his luckiness to achieve good results. His Microsoft group wasn’t also built on randomly bases. Bill Gates is a genius of computer, management and business.
Bill Gates is a normal people as like as everyone, he always knows how he does it. Knowing use advantages of him so that get find opportunities and he has successes up to now. Now, he has anything whose he has ever respired. It is also money, status, fame…After that, remaining hiding of the basic thing. There are secrets which helped him to becomes famous and wealth; are experience lessons helped he could set up after he was out of success and are gold principles that he accumulated along time, are supports of spiritual aspects for him at the necessary times while he was trying hard to change his situation. There are invisible properties which is more importance than jewelry. Thank to things, Bill Gates reached to peak of success and anyone of us also admires and desires very much.
Having an old sentence wrote that many people thought that the life is created by chances and luckiness. Actually, this was wrong. The life is created by rules and principles. “Rule is root of everything, is gold principles which decides to success and failures of things”.
Thus, it is up to us to know that only voluntaries study and learn by heart the principles then we can understand similar points between the normal people and the great people. From that, we shall find the best way for going from normal things to great things. And we for all one are worth to pass over the difficulty in the life and go over big with flying colors.
Mar 22, 2011, 12:17 PM
Please proof-read your draft carefully again and then post it. How many times did you read over your writing before posting? I don't want to discourage you, but from the first to the last sentence of your writing, I had a hard time understanding. You seem to have good things to write about, so you should try again and we can go from there because it would make you feel worst if I or someone simply rewrite your whole essay.