Help me with my very first English poem, plz !
Hadn't come back to school for 7 yrs, my English is gone w/the wine hihihi
Hey, don't laugh at my very first English poem ehehehehehehehe . Oh my God, it's harder than I thought and I hate grammar ! I know in this poem some words that aren't rhyme with others ...
Anyway, you're welcome to correct my spelling, grammar, sentences ..... (shhhhh !don't tell Toyo, I know he'll laugh very hard at my crazy poem )
How am I supposed to know
Inside your heart was covered with snow
There were no mathermatical fomula
To solve our problems when it went too far
I am a girl like everyone else
I do get tired, I do get frustrated
I'm just feeling like I can't be myself
Let my own mind a day go blinded
Tell me why, oh please tell me why
Until now you're not here by my side
Your careless is hurting my soul
To destroy my love is one of your goals ?!!
How am I supposed to know
Our love died long time ago
We are not longer a couple
Why I'm fighting in this crazy battle ?
TTTT
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