Got Grammar???

[gdpt-]

I confess, I am horrible with grammar and I am in need of your help. Below are sentences that are grammatically incorrect (or so I assume). Can you correct it for me?

Please, when you correct my sentences, can you bold the changes?

Here it is:

I play a roll as a student in ESE. When I'm bore, I tends to log in Paltalk to chat with my fellow online mates via one of the chatroom. They're mentors. Not only is the instructors amicably, but they are also helpful in assisting me with my English.

Thank you! au revoir!

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[gdpt-]

Okay, since no one was kind enough to correct my grammar for me. I might as well tự biên tự diễn.

"I play a roll as a student in ESE. When I'm bored, I tend to log onto Paltalk to chat with my fellow online mates via one of the chatrooms. They're mentors. Not only are the instructors amicable, but they are also helpful in assisting me with my English."

Ghét.

[gdpt-]

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance.

"It were on Sunday afternoon when I see my sister. We went to the beach and we eat McDonalds for dinner."

[Handsome Bear]

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance.

"It were on Sunday afternoon when I see my sister. We went to the beach and we eat McDonalds for dinner."

My first instinct tells me that the correct sentence should be: “It was Sunday afternoon when I saw my sister. We went to the beach, and we had McDonalds for dinner.”

And if Miss Jeedy gives bonuses for thinking of a different way to say it, I would put down: "I saw my sister on Sunday afternoon . We went to the beach then had dinner at McDonalds."

[gdpt-]

Handsome, you never fail to amaze me with your originative thinking and your effort to strive and surpass what's being asked. (I'm a poet and I don't even know it)

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Chơi tiếp đi cô Gd, tại hồi đó Thanks chưa biết ESE

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance.

Hello, are it me you're looking for?
'Cause I wonder where are you
And I wonder what do you
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying ... I love you

[Blissful Blessing]

Okay, since no one was kind enough to correct my grammar for me. I might as well tự biên tự diễn.

"I play a roll as a student in ESE."

I hope it's not too late but "roll" needs to be "role".

[gdpt-]

Ah, yes, Blissful. Role should be roll.

Here's the next one:

ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.

Just change it so that it is grammatically correct.

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.

ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and ambition student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't respond to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.

Trời ơi, mũi của Thanks to bằng trái cà chua oy` hihi

[Babie Lisa]

Cho Lisa sen dzô tí nha ...

ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and ambition (ambitious) student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't respond to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.