Got Grammar???

[gdpt-]

I confess, I am horrible with grammar and I am in need of your help. Below are sentences that are grammatically incorrect (or so I assume). Can you correct it for me?

Please, when you correct my sentences, can you bold the changes?

Here it is:

I play a roll as a student in ESE. When I'm bore, I tends to log in Paltalk to chat with my fellow online mates via one of the chatroom. They're mentors. Not only is the instructors amicably, but they are also helpful in assisting me with my English.

Thank you! :salute:au revoir!

[gdpt-]

Okay, since no one was kind enough to correct my grammar for me. I might as well tự biên tự diễn. :frown:

"I play a roll as a student in ESE. When I'm bored, I tend to log onto Paltalk to chat with my fellow online mates via one of the chatrooms. They're mentors. Not only are the instructors amicable, but they are also helpful in assisting me with my English."

Ghét. :no:

[gdpt-]

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance. :ranting:

"It were on Sunday afternoon when I see my sister. We went to the beach and we eat McDonalds for dinner."

:please:

[Handsome Bear]

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance. :ranting:

"It were on Sunday afternoon when I see my sister. We went to the beach and we eat McDonalds for dinner."

:please:

My first instinct tells me that the correct sentence should be: “It was Sunday afternoon when I saw my sister. We went to the beach, and we had McDonalds for dinner.”

And if Miss Jeedy gives bonuses for thinking of a different way to say it, I would put down: "I saw my sister on Sunday afternoon :hug:. We went to the beach :tam: then had dinner at McDonalds.:eat:"


:thankyou:

[gdpt-]

Handsome, you never fail to amaze me with your originative thinking and your effort to strive and surpass what's being asked. (I'm a poet and I don't even know it)

:hug:

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Chơi tiếp đi cô Gd, tại hồi đó Thanks chưa biết ESE :oyasumi:

I need more help with grammar. I need guidance.

Hello, are it me you're looking for?
'Cause I wonder where are you
And I wonder what do you
Are you somewhere feeling lonely or is someone loving you?
Tell me how win your heart
For I haven't got a clue
But let me start by saying ... I love you

[Blissful Blessing]

Okay, since no one was kind enough to correct my grammar for me. I might as well tự biên tự diễn. :frown:

"I play a roll as a student in ESE."

I hope it's not too late but "roll" needs to be "role".

[gdpt-]

Ah, yes, Blissful. Role should be roll.

Here's the next one:

ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.

Just change it so that it is grammatically correct.

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.


ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and ambition student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't respond to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.

Trời ơi, mũi của Thanks to bằng trái cà chua oy` hihi

[Babie Lisa]

Cho Lisa sen dzô tí nha ...



ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and ambition (ambitious) student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't respond to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Cám ơn Lisa nha, mắt Thanks mơ huyền nên không thấy chỗ đó... :beautifu2:

...mơ huyền mờ

[tieu_muoi_1992]

Cho TM chen thêm 1 chút nữa...
If she hadn't responded to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied.
:khi12:

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Very good job TieuMuoi, mắt Thanks mơ có dấu huyền mà còn bỏ thêm dấu nặng nữa... mờ nặng lol

[gdpt-]

Thank you for correcting my grammar =) I really appreciate it.

Previous sentence: ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.

Corrected version: ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and an ambitious student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't responded to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.


Next sentence
I be so proud of ya'll. I no my grammar is badly, and I thank you to helping me. I am greatful to has you as my friends. You is nice.

[Babie Lisa]

I be so proud of ya'll. I no my grammar is badly, and I thank you to helping me. I am greatful to has you as my friends. You is nice.

I'm so proud of you all. I know my grammar is bad, and I thank you for helping me. I am grateful to have you (all) as my friend(s). You're (all) so nice.

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Lisa nhanh chân quá, Thanks lạch đạch chạy vô thì Lisa đã làm rồi hihi.



Previous sentence: ThanksForTeachingMe are a dedicated and an ambition student. She have many friend. SHe is very enthusiastically about learning. If her hadn't respond to this post, Blssful wouldn't have replied. Thank you with responding.

Corrected version: ThanksForTeachingMe is a dedicated and an ambitious student. She has many friends. She is very enthusiastic about learning. If she hadn't responded to this post, Blissful wouldn't have replied. Thank you for responding.


Cô Gd ơi, còn chữ "an", cô chưa bỏ kìa.

[tieu_muoi_1992]

TM nghĩ "a dedicated and ambitious student" là đúng rồi sis Thanks... TM nghĩ "dedicated and ambitious" đều modify cho "student" nên chỉ cần một mạo từ "a" là được.
:khi12:

[ThanksForTeachingMe]

Đúng rồi TieuMuoi, nên Thanks thấy cô Gd quên bỏ chữ "an" ra nên Thanks làm thư ký nhắc cô Gd bỏ chữ "an" ra đó mà. :binhsua_13:

[gdpt-]

Hai cách dều OK cả. Mình có thể nói như thế nầy:

Thanks is (a dedicated student).
Thanks is (an ambitious student).

Thanks is a (dedicated and ambitious student).
Thanks is (a dedicated) and (an ambitious student).

Next sentence:

I am a tall, and happy girl. I name jen. I was birth in da nang, vietnam. There is 2 people in me famely. My sister speak english very good. She brought a cat at a pet store and its name is Leo. Leo is smaller then my cat.

[Babie Lisa]

I am a tall, and happy girl. I name jen. I was birth in da nang, vietnam. There is 2 people in me famely. My sister speak english very good. She brought a cat at a pet store and its name is Leo. Leo is smaller then my cat.

Câu này hong có dzì wrong het to me ... [-( ... Just kidding.

De thử:

My name is Jen, I'm a tall and happy girl [cho na`y ho*i ky`]. I was born in Da Nang, Vietnam. There are two people in my family. My sister speaks English very well. She bought a cat at a pet store and named it Leo. Leo is smaller than my cat.

[gdpt-]

NEXT Sentence:

I, to, am a dedicate student. If I can be any animal, I would chose to be a pig. If I am a pig, I can be as lazy as I want, eat as much as I need, be as dirty as I please. I can be a fat and no one can judges me becaues that is how pigs is suppose to be.

[anhhailua2004]

I am a tall, and happy girl. I name jen. I was birth in da nang, vietnam. There is 2 people in me famely. My sister speak english very good. She brought a cat at a pet store and its name is Leo. Leo is smaller then my cat.


I am a tall and happy girl. My name is Jen. I was born in Danang, Vietnam. There are two people in my family. My sister speaks English very well. She bought a cat at the pet store and its name is Leo. Leo is smaller than my cat.

[anhhailua2004]

I, to, am a dedicate student. If I can be any animal, I would chose to be a pig. If I am a pig, I can be as lazy as I want, eat as much as I need, be as dirty as I please. I can be a fat and no one can judges me becaues that is how pigs is suppose to be.

I am a dedicate student. If I could be an animal, I would choose to be a pig. If I were a pig, I could be as lazy as I want , eat as much as I can, be as dirty as I like. I could be a fat pig, and no one can judge me because that how pig is supposed to be.


Kho^ng biet viet vay co dung khong GDPT - sua dum cho a2l nha ;-)

[gdpt-]

Thank you, anh Hai.


I am a dedicate studentThis sentence should be fixed as "I am a dedicated student." Dedicate is a verb. Dedicated is an adjective. Here, we are describing the student (noun), so we need to use the adjective form.


because that how pig is supposed to be
This sentence should be fixed as, "... because that's how pigs are supposed to be." You should never say "that how, that right ... etc." That is how ... that is right.

The first correction you submitted was great.

[gdpt-]

Updated. Here is the next sentence. Please help me fix my grammar. :)

The capitol of Colorado is Denver. I never been to there. I past by their several times while driving to kansas. I have a sister who's husband live there. They've been marry four over five year.