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Sep 25, 2007, 10:27 AM
Write an excuse for not working today.
Below are writing pieces written during class. The original text is in BLACK and the revised text is in GREEN.
zero-to-one: Dear .... my teeth need to be removed immediately, So I would love asking for non-working today...
Dear...My teeth are all rotten now because I ate all the candies you gave me last week. I need to get them all removed, so I won't be coming in today.
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nobody2008vn: Hi Sir !! Mr. A. I’m No…. The first thing, I bless you have a great day. The next thing, I would like to tell you why I can’t go to work today. Because my love have to trip in California today and I must go with her if I don’t want her to be kidnapped by the other guy. She looks very pretty and her voice is very fantastic, so I can dare say to you anyone can fall inlove with her at the first sight. I don’t want that will be happen, so that I will take some vacation days for traveling with her. Sorry sir, but if you got married you can understand my thought now. Thanks for your accept. Again Have a great day sir.
Dear Mr. A, I am Nobie. First, I wish you a great day. Second, I would like to ask to be excused from work today because I have to go to California with my friend, otherwise, she will be kidnapped by another guy. My friend is very pretty, and her voice is fantastic. I guarantee that everyone would fall in love with her when he first see her, and I don't want that to happen. That is why I would like to take some vacations to
travel with her. I am sure that if you are a married man, you would understand my problem. Thank you very much, and again, have a great
day.
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snowdrop_14: Hi Don. i'm calling in to let you know that i need today off and probably I won't be able to make it in the next fewdays. I have upper respiratory infection and my doctor told me that i need at least a few days to recuperate. I have been coughing the whole night. Now my head and my throat hurt like... (&^*") and i also throwed up several times lastnight. thanks Don, you have a goodday and take care.
snowdrop_14: (&^*") means that something you can't not imagine.
Hi Don, I'm calling in to let you know that I need to be off today. In addition, I probably won't be able to make it in the next few days as well. I have been coughing and vomiting throughout the night. Now, my head and throat hurt like hell. Thanks, Don. I hope you have a good day, and take care.
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muonhocthemAV: A note for my boss, "Oh boss, I forgot to tell you that my childen's dental appointment is today. Therefore, I can't make it to work. I hope you can find someone to take over my work load. Thanks."
Hi, Boss. I forgot to tell you that my children have a dental appointment so I can't make it to work today. I hope you can find someone to take over my workload. Thanks.
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iPropose: Dear Sir,
I am sorry I have to write you this letter instead of calling you because my teacher asked that I write to you instead of calling. It pains my head to try thinking of a good reason so that I can take a day off from the load of work you left for me last Friday. First of all, this afternoon I was invited to try some wontons from a close friend of mine, and now I feel very uneasy in my stomach. I am not sure whether the sickness I feel is from the wontons, or from the pile of paper I saw when I get to work today, but I sure am feeling very sick. I hope I can take this day off so that I can concentrate on writing up my resume and try looking for another position, whether it’ll be a food-taster, or a new data-entry position. I bid you good luck on the meeting tomorrow, because I haven’t worked on any of the papers you gave to me today.
Sincerely yours,
iPropose
Dear Sir,
I am sorry I have to write you this letter instead of calling you because my teacher asked that I write to you instead of calling. It pains me to think of an adequate reason to remediate from the workload you left for me last Friday. First of all, this afternoon I was invited to try some wontons from a close friend of mine, and now I feel very uneasy in my stomach. I am not sure whether the sickness I feel is from the wontons, or from the pile of paper I saw when I arrived today, but I sure am feeling very sick. I hope I can take this day off so that I can concentrate on writing up my resume and try looking for another position, whether it’ll be a food-taster, or a new data-entry position. I bid you good luck on the meeting tomorrow, because I haven’t worked on any of the papers you gave to me today.
Sincerely yours,
iPropose
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z Sunshine Day z: Sir... I'm sorry to tell you that I can not go to work today, because my wife (Bamboo) is sick and I have to stay home to take care her anything.....(He says OK)... Thank you, sir.
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ClearH2O: Sorry boss ,I couldn't report for work today because I stayed up all night vomitting &spent a great time through the sitting on the throne,thank in part of my wife cooking,if you'd like,I'll bring you some left over so you can share your part as a comrade in arms of what I went through.
Below are writing pieces written during class. The original text is in BLACK and the revised text is in GREEN.
zero-to-one: Dear .... my teeth need to be removed immediately, So I would love asking for non-working today...
Dear...My teeth are all rotten now because I ate all the candies you gave me last week. I need to get them all removed, so I won't be coming in today.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
nobody2008vn: Hi Sir !! Mr. A. I’m No…. The first thing, I bless you have a great day. The next thing, I would like to tell you why I can’t go to work today. Because my love have to trip in California today and I must go with her if I don’t want her to be kidnapped by the other guy. She looks very pretty and her voice is very fantastic, so I can dare say to you anyone can fall inlove with her at the first sight. I don’t want that will be happen, so that I will take some vacation days for traveling with her. Sorry sir, but if you got married you can understand my thought now. Thanks for your accept. Again Have a great day sir.
Dear Mr. A, I am Nobie. First, I wish you a great day. Second, I would like to ask to be excused from work today because I have to go to California with my friend, otherwise, she will be kidnapped by another guy. My friend is very pretty, and her voice is fantastic. I guarantee that everyone would fall in love with her when he first see her, and I don't want that to happen. That is why I would like to take some vacations to
travel with her. I am sure that if you are a married man, you would understand my problem. Thank you very much, and again, have a great
day.
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snowdrop_14: Hi Don. i'm calling in to let you know that i need today off and probably I won't be able to make it in the next fewdays. I have upper respiratory infection and my doctor told me that i need at least a few days to recuperate. I have been coughing the whole night. Now my head and my throat hurt like... (&^*") and i also throwed up several times lastnight. thanks Don, you have a goodday and take care.
snowdrop_14: (&^*") means that something you can't not imagine.
Hi Don, I'm calling in to let you know that I need to be off today. In addition, I probably won't be able to make it in the next few days as well. I have been coughing and vomiting throughout the night. Now, my head and throat hurt like hell. Thanks, Don. I hope you have a good day, and take care.
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muonhocthemAV: A note for my boss, "Oh boss, I forgot to tell you that my childen's dental appointment is today. Therefore, I can't make it to work. I hope you can find someone to take over my work load. Thanks."
Hi, Boss. I forgot to tell you that my children have a dental appointment so I can't make it to work today. I hope you can find someone to take over my workload. Thanks.
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iPropose: Dear Sir,
I am sorry I have to write you this letter instead of calling you because my teacher asked that I write to you instead of calling. It pains my head to try thinking of a good reason so that I can take a day off from the load of work you left for me last Friday. First of all, this afternoon I was invited to try some wontons from a close friend of mine, and now I feel very uneasy in my stomach. I am not sure whether the sickness I feel is from the wontons, or from the pile of paper I saw when I get to work today, but I sure am feeling very sick. I hope I can take this day off so that I can concentrate on writing up my resume and try looking for another position, whether it’ll be a food-taster, or a new data-entry position. I bid you good luck on the meeting tomorrow, because I haven’t worked on any of the papers you gave to me today.
Sincerely yours,
iPropose
Dear Sir,
I am sorry I have to write you this letter instead of calling you because my teacher asked that I write to you instead of calling. It pains me to think of an adequate reason to remediate from the workload you left for me last Friday. First of all, this afternoon I was invited to try some wontons from a close friend of mine, and now I feel very uneasy in my stomach. I am not sure whether the sickness I feel is from the wontons, or from the pile of paper I saw when I arrived today, but I sure am feeling very sick. I hope I can take this day off so that I can concentrate on writing up my resume and try looking for another position, whether it’ll be a food-taster, or a new data-entry position. I bid you good luck on the meeting tomorrow, because I haven’t worked on any of the papers you gave to me today.
Sincerely yours,
iPropose
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z Sunshine Day z: Sir... I'm sorry to tell you that I can not go to work today, because my wife (Bamboo) is sick and I have to stay home to take care her anything.....(He says OK)... Thank you, sir.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
ClearH2O: Sorry boss ,I couldn't report for work today because I stayed up all night vomitting &spent a great time through the sitting on the throne,thank in part of my wife cooking,if you'd like,I'll bring you some left over so you can share your part as a comrade in arms of what I went through.