Please help me to modify about my small paragraph

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Nowadays, The Internet is popular and helpful for everybody. One of them is me.
I’m programmer therefore Internet is very important to me. I can find a lot of information about soft wares, e-books and something I need. When I have difficulty in my work, I can find a helpful in the in Internet.
When I feel boring I can listen to music and play game online and see movie online. I can find some new friends in the Internet too. If I want to improve my English skills, the Internet can help me.
In short, Internet has many advantages but it has many disadvantages too. For example:
- There is much bad information which brings about bad effects for generation.
- It is a tool for criminals.
- It will addict to everybody.
- You can to betray your information.
- Virus can break into your computer. If you don't protect your computer against virus.

[Bear Lac Loi]

Nowadays, The Internet is popular and helpful for everybody. One of them is me.
I’m programmer therefore Internet is very important to me. I can find a lot of information about soft wares, e-books and something I need. When I have difficulty in my work, I can find a helpful in the in Internet.
When I feel boring I can listen to music and play game online and see movie online. I can find some new friends in the Internet too. If I want to improve my English skills, the Internet can help me.
In short, Internet has many advantages but it has many disadvantages too. For example:
- There is much bad information which brings about bad effects for generation.
- It is a tool for criminals.
- It will addict to everybody.
- You can to betray your information.
- Virus can break into your computer. If you don't protect your computer against virus.

Please help me to (delete: to) modify about (delete: about) my small (short) paragraph

Nowadays, the Internet is popular and helpful for (to) everybody. One of them is me (I).

I’m (add: a) programmer (semicolon) therefore (comma)(add: the) Internet is very important to me. I can find a lot of information about soft wares (software), e-books (comma) and something I need. When I have difficulty (difficulties) in my work, I can find a (delete: a) helpful (add: suggestions) in (from) the in (delete: in) Internet.

When I feel boring (bored)I can listen to music and play game online and see movie online (I can listen to music, play games, or see movies online). I can find some new friends in (on) the Internet (comma) too. If I want to improve my English skills, the Internet can help me.

In short, (suggest: delete “In shorts,”)(add: the) Internet has many advantages (comma) but it has many disadvantages (comma) too. For example:
- There is much bad information which brings about bad effects for generation. (There is bad information from the Internet that misinforms the readers)
- It is (can be used as) a tool for (by) criminals (or, for criminal activities).
- It will addict to everybody (turns people into an Internet addict).
- You can to betray your information. (I’m not sure what you mean)
- Virus can break into your computer. If you don't protect your computer against virus. (Your computer can catch a virus if you don’t have virus protection software.)

:-)

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Thanks for your help.