Got Grammar???

[Bobo321]

Thanks sis Jeedy. :-)
Please give us another sentence for correcting.

[Jeedy]

Level: Pre-Intermediate

One of my fear is not be able to chew in ice. My parent are experience tooth sensibility they often complains
about it. I brushes my tooth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problem.

[Hoangthaimy]

Level: Pre-Intermediate

One of my fear is not be able to chew in ice. My parent are experience tooth sensibility they often complains
about it. I brushes my tooth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problem.

One of my fears is not be able to chew ice. My parents had experience of tooth sensibility, they often complain about it. I brush my teeth at least twice a day to prevent cavities and other oral problems.

I am not sure about the second sentence! :p

[buiminhese]

Level: Pre-Intermediate

One of my fear is not be able to chew in ice. My parent are experience tooth sensibility they often complains
about it. I brushes my tooth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problem.

One of my fears is not be (delete:be) able to chew in (delete: in) ice. My parents are (delete: are) experienced tooth sensibility they often complain about it. I brush my teeth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problems.

[lang thang]

Level: Pre-Intermediate

One of my fear is not be able to chew in ice. My parent are experience tooth sensibility they often complains
about it. I brushes my tooth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problem.
One of my fears is not being able to chew ice. My parents are experiencing tooth sensitivity; they often complain about it. I brush my teeth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problems.

[Jeedy]

Ủa, sao Bobo kêu gd post câu mới mà không vào correct vậy ta, hehe... chắc là busy rồi.

@Hòang:
"parents had experience of..." Nếu muốn viết "had" (quá khứ) thì the verb kế tiếp phải là past tense luôn. So it should be, "my parents had experienced..." Như là "had been," "had worked," had written... etc.

@Hoàng và Bụi Minh,
"tooth sensibility..." the word I am looking for is "teeth sensitivity." Nếu muốn nói "một cái răng" thì tooth cũng được nên gd sẽ không bắt bẽ từ teeth hay tooth.

@Lang Thang, very good.

Preferred Sentence:
"One of my fears is not being able to chew ice. My parents are experiencing teeth sensitivity and (or semicolon cũng dược) they often complain about it. I brush my teeth at least twice daily to prevent cavities and other oral problems."

[buiminhese]

câu tiếp nữa đi cô Jeedy : D

[Bobo321]

Sis Jeedy, you're right. I'm quite busy. However, your response, this time, is so fast. :(

Please give us another.:khi112:

[Jeedy]

Level: Semi Difficult.

I am learning english for five year. However my pronunciation is neither good or understanding.
I thinks my grammar are best then my pronunciate. How do you think.

[buiminhese]

Level: Semi Difficult.

I have been learning English for five years. However, my pronunciation is neither good nor understandable.
I think my grammar is better than my pronunciation. What do you think?

Thank you cô Jeedy

[Bobo321]

I have been learning English for five years. However, my pronunciation is neither good nor understandable. I think my grammar is better than my pronunciation. What do you think about this?

[Jeedy]

Haha, câu đó chắc dễ quá. Bồ bỏ và Bụi Minh did a great job. :D

I have been learning English for five years. However, my pronunciation is neither good nor understandable. I think my grammar is better than my pronunciation. What do you think?


Để suy nghĩ câu nào khó khó rồi sẽ post tiếp.

[Jeedy]

Level: Advance

I should of take the day of. I can't seem to be focused. My noses are clog up and I couldn't breath.
The doctor insured that the nose spray he subscribed would help with my congestigation. It did not.

[Bobo321]

I should take a day off. I can't seem to be focused. My nose is clogged up and I can’t breathe. The doctor assured that the nasal spray he prescribed would help with my congestion. It did not work.

Sis Jeedy,

The sentence "I can't seem to be focused" is quite strange to me. I cannot figure out whether it's correct or not. :(

[heineken4881]

thanks....

[Jeedy]

"I can't seem to be focused." It should be, "I can't seem to focus" or "I can't seem to stay focused." Nghia la, ta.p chung khong duoc. When we use "can't seem to + verb," the verb should be in the present tense. As in: I can't seem to eat, I can't seem to sleep, I can't seem to meditate..." If you want to use "to be," you can say "I can't seem to be able to eat, I can't seem to be happy.

"I should take a day off"
A is an indefinite article implies mot ngay nao do'. The is a definite article, as in nga`y nay.

Correct sentence:
I should take the day off. I can't seem to focus. My nose is clogged up and I can’t breathe. The doctor assured me that the nasal spray he prescribed would help with my congestion. It did not work.

Overal, great job!

[buiminhese]

I like your sentences so much, sis Jeedy. Could you give more exercises? Hì : D.