WRITING ASSIGNMENT on JUNE 05, 2007.

Rules:

- 5 to 10 sentences.

- 50 to 100 words.

- No profanity, no sexually suggestive writing.

- Use YOUR imagination.



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- REPLY to this post to enter your paragraph.





TOPIC: If I could become invisible ... ...

[ZezetheX]

HcVcT fixes for me, plz. Thank you.



If I could become invisible I would follow moneyed men where Cruel, break into their home and piracy to go their asset. Next, I would donate those sum of money for people who were poor and miserable (in which there is me, hehehe). I hope I can make this deed the whole of life that no one is detected. Making like that me to can balance somewhat between differentiating of wealthy and poorly in society nowadays.



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ZezetheX, following is what we came up with in class...





I could become invivisible, I would follow rich greedy men. I would break into their home amd invade their privacy. Next, I would donate the whole thing to people who are poor and unfortunate. If I could have my wish, I would go undetected with this deed throughout my entire life. My ambition for the world is the balance of the poor and the wealthy.

[englishadmin]

My sister’s birthday is coming up,so if I could become invisible I would give her a surprise party.I would sneak in her house.After that I would set everything up, a table with candlelight,birthday cake,flowers,her favorite foods,and drinks..oh…can’t forget a sweet birthday’s card next to the cake..whoa..it would be on time for her to comes home..I would hide myself in the corner even though I would be invisible at that time.I would wait for her to gets in to the house to see my little party for her.The last thing I would do before return back to visible would be stand behind her back and sing for her a Happy Birthday song..



Anh Hữu ,sửa cho moon dùm nhé.. :D ,thank you



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Moon, following is what we came up with in class...





My sister's birthday is coming up. If I could become invisible I would give her a surprise party. I would sneak into her house. After that, I would set everything up -- a table with candlelights, a birthday cake, some beautiful flowers, and her favorite foods. Oh! can't forget a sweet birthday card sitting right next to the cake. Whoa! When it's time for her to come home, I would hide myself in the corner although I would still be invisible at that time. I would wait for her to get into the house to see my little party. The last thing I would do before returning back to be visible would be standing behind her back and singing a happy birthday song.

[englishadmin]

thank you so much for your correction,anh Hữu..

[afewew]

If I could be invisible for just a day then I would do a lot of things but to be invisible forever I would not want to be. If I could be invisible for just one day then I would go wonder how it would feel to be visible again. If I was invisible I would go on a very exciting hunt. If I was invisible then you would be visible. If I was invisible I would not be that likable. If I was invisible I would not be visible.